Tear after tear
I am lost here
life is never fair
and it all reflects
in a mirror
I am weak
I am not strong
though I look to God
I ask for the help needed
to overcome
for it just seems to be,
trial after trial
test after test
when can I rest?
^^
These r my fav stanzas. I enjoyed reading it. Great poen. Ofc a 5 from me:)
13 years ago
by average thoughts
Nicely written,5..
Plz correct two times are in the first stnza
this is such a sad poem.
you can feel the pain of crying each day just trying to be strong even though your not(when you actually are<3).
You penned the emotion perfectly love.