by Brittany Klein Oct 21, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
10/21/2011 |
by Paul Gondwe
This is wonderful..i can relate to this..i was actualy smiling while reading this reminscin on past things in my life..the idea of the poem is unique and ur wording and flow is superb. |
by Paul Gondwe
This is wonderful..i can relate to this..i was actualy smiling while reading this reminscin on past things in my life..the idea of the poem is unique and ur wording and flow is superb. |
by BlueJay
I know what this feels like, and it makes for a unique poem. I think it is an excellent idea for something new, and it lets the audience know something about who you are personally. It is an amazing piece in my opinion. The word choice is fabulous, the rhymes are so subtle and don't seem forced at all. This is so wonderful I have to give it a 5/5 |