Pain

by ShAnEL   Oct 22, 2011


Pain doen't hurt wen its all yu've felt. .
Suicide is painless, its life dat hurts. .
Thank yoohz for making me worthless in yur eyes. .
Yu used to be da reason i breathed,
Now yu make me choke. .
Maybe, if my heart stops beating, it wont hurt soooz. . bad. .
We dont cut ourselfs wit razors or slivers of glass, but wit broken pieces of hearts.
i gave yu everthing, but. . it still wasnt enough to make yu want to stay. .
Sick of crying, tired of trying. Sure i maybe smiling, but inside i amz dying. .
Feel my pain,hear my screams, && watch me fade away. .
Cuz not all scars show, && not all wounds are healed!
Sometimes. . yu cant alwayz see da pain dat someone else feels!!!

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I will start of with some constructive criticism - when writing a poem it sounds and looks better to use proper words instead of shortened ones. For example you put:
    "Yu used to be da reason i breathed"

    I think it would be better if you put:
    "You use to be the reason I breathed"

    Anyway that said I loved the poem and the emotional content.

    5/5

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