I checked it out and

OH JEEZE CHRIST!

the last stanza was ur status on msn.....hmmm :P
will pop up with a longer comment soon ;)

I actually didn't know the song before so I thought I'd listen to it and I have to admit that I enjoyed it, but to be honest I enjoyed your poem way more and if you get inspired by songs and end up writing poems like these, keep listening to music!

I like how you described the speakers (your?) feelings because they seem so pure, real and absolutely relateable. The feelings in this poem was what capitvated me. I mean the way you worded this was somehow simple, but it felt real, which is more important to me than difficult words and/or complicated sentences. I like that you're straight to the point and say what you want the reader to know, your images are clear and original. I rarely read an as sad and touching poem as this one.