Loathing Glares

I feel a connection with this poem as soon as I start reading it. The first few lines are so powerful. It's like your own personal vent!

As I keep reading I realise that this is a parent figure of some sort that just keeps bringing you down

you nag me constantly
every day it seems
do you even realize
what you make me feel
each and every day

you love me
sure
but do you realize
what you say

Nag and complain
overlooking what I do
you make me angry
you paralyze me,
stabbing me with words
poisoning me
With your venomous stare

These words, express what a parent would do when they are disappointed in you. I know how that feels which is why I feel connected to this poem.

I love my parents very much but sometimes they don't know when they've gone overboard with things or don't realise what they say actually hurts us.

It's numbing

Well done

x

I really sense the frustration and anxiety. nicely done!

Genuis.if i spelled it right.lol.

Writing is a good way to vent ones pain. It does happen, no matter what you do or how much you try its never enough. This piece perfectly describes the agony and the torment. The flow is fluid. Job well done =)

This was a great poem. Sometimes we need to let out our emotions. Poetry is one of my ways of doing so. Nice write. :)