This is amazing. The emotion is there, as is story, but so are the technical bits of imagery and description. This piece is short yet thanks to the word choice and flow it seems perfect. Excellent job 5/5

I love this, you can see the images you created and it's alll so dreamy and lovely,,,very desirable,,,great job my friend I love all your poems :0) 5/5

This is a tidy little poem which I loved from start to end. You have some excellent imagery in this piece and I hope more people C/V this.

5/5