Splendid job with the poem. The flow is fluid. You never fail to surprise. This piece is filled with a bit of despair and regret, written precisely. Emotions flowing untamed. Well done hun..

I thought this poem was excellently writen. I loved the feel of the poem and how the emotion jumps out at you.

"When
will you wake...and realize you
died a long time ago?"

^ This was the part that made the poem for me. It was so powerful.

5/5

Your poem flow with such ease of grace. Words carefully picked and placed. Excellent poem

Connie

Excellent write Nik, It's very deep in the value of emotion and frustration but flowed easy and read with clarity

I could feel what you wrote, my friend.

I know who this piece is talking about, and I'm sorry for your lose, I really am, I don't know what to say, perhaps all words are just the same to you now, and nothing can consolate you, except for onething, maybe if she appeared in your life again, you'll forget this pain, I'm feeling you, Shanik, I have lost many dear people in my life and I know what it feels like to move on without them by my side, I just want you to smile and know that this is what life is all about, experiences, happiness, misery, pleasure, pain, love, hate, break-ups, coincidences but the most important in life is strength..you gotta cling to the last rope and fight to find what comforts you.

Maybe my words just never make any difference to you, I just hope you might think about them a little and smile for a moment, thanks for the very sad read.

P.S. I love you.

I could feel what you wrote, my friend.

I know who this piece is talking about, and I'm sorry for your lose, I really am, I don't know what to say, perhaps all words are just the same to you now, and nothing can consolate you, except for onething, maybe if she appeared in your life again, you'll forget this pain, I'm feeling you, Shanik, I have lost many dear people in my life and I know what it feels like to move on without them by my side, I just want you to smile and know that this is what life is all about, experiences, happiness, misery, pleasure, pain, love, hate, break-ups, coincidences but the most important in life is strength..you gotta cling to the last rope and fight to find what comforts you.

Maybe my words just never make any difference to you, I just hope you might think about them a little and smile for a moment, thanks for the very sad read.

P.S. I love you.

It is sad and dark and I am sorry someone close to you is gone.

Powerful. Thank you for sharing this.