Austin you may not think it is one of your best but as far as I am concerned it is. If you only knew how much these words struck at my heart when I read them, very fitting for a recent event in my life. The structure and flow is good. Well done.

Aussy! Aussy....Aussy!

I soooo missed your work, where were you, dude???
this was so sad......austin...made me remember all regrets i have! seriously....the subject is over-used, some words are a bit of cliche, but...your flow and atmosphere made it special....

thanks for the read !

hope to read moooooreeeee from you soon! : D

I think you should always vent! :)

Amazing piece.

I may not be as good as commenting as you. but i wanted to let you know i read you poem, and i liked it very much. i thought it was simply wonderful.

The second stanza presents that this person you are speaking about (or speaking to) is gone. I can definitely feel the sadness and regret for all the wrong things you've done to this person...
This is very relatable to me right now.

Thanks for sharing your vent. It's a great piece, and kinda eases my own pain :)
5/5

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