Comments : Half-eaten Apple

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Is Abby's contest had been moved to your profile? Lol

    I lovvveeed this write, Steve Jobez has formed a big part of technology, I regret that he died without being with us (the syrians) for at last, we knew he was syrian at heart...

    Nice poem, Meme, nice poem and a good metaphor.

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    ^ lol hahahaha
    Yes he is Syrian!!

    Meme, this was one of my best club poems during Abby's contest.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem made me go haha. It put a smile on my face. I feel though that this poem may be better in the "Fun, Humor" section of the site but other than that great poem.

    5/5