Comments : Six Days

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    I have to say Holly, I really do like this. And I love the use of third person throughout the poem.

    Good job girl :)

  • 13 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Dear, I'll be here for you through it all. No matter what happens. Thank you for always listening to my whining and complaining and letting me try to help you to the best of my ability.

    One of your best poems; third person can be really hard to write in especially when you're used to first person.
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Loved it girl 5/5