by Meme Oct 23, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Your teary eyes gaze |
This was a short but well thought out poem. It was clear to see you put a lot of effort into finding the right wording and the effort paid off as it allowed the reader to step into the mind of the poet even though the poem itself was really short. |
by Boy
Absolutely a wonderful piece of writing. personification is good. and i love the way you write tanka... |