Reflections (Tanka)

by Meme   Oct 23, 2011


Your teary eyes gaze
so still at her reflection,
recalling how she
whispers her cries, with the rain
drops coming down your window.

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This was a short but well thought out poem. It was clear to see you put a lot of effort into finding the right wording and the effort paid off as it allowed the reader to step into the mind of the poet even though the poem itself was really short.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Absolutely a wonderful piece of writing. personification is good. and i love the way you write tanka...