Aww Yaki, this is adorable. I think I know who this is about, haha. It's cute though, being lost in that daze as you gaze at the one you love, and how beautiful they are to you & nobody understands this feeling but you and only you. Well done!

Yakzzz. : )

That was not cheesy, that was sweet. <333
Love can do that ; D

good write!

YAKI, this is so sweet. I especially liked the ending, when you commented on being unable to paint, unless it's a life with the other person. Very beautiful poetry :)

This poem made me go awww! its a very sweet poem and every stanza flows so well

5/5