by LostLikeTearsInRain Oct 24, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Every night I lay beside an angel |
by BlueJay
This is a sweet piece. Great job on the emotion. I can't say this is your best piece, but it is well written. Awesome word choice, it was like the glue to hold all the other parts together. Your flow got off a little at the end but overall it is a wonderful write/ |