Tic Toc

by Lioness   Oct 24, 2011


Darkness awakens me -
tic toc

Unable to lay my head down to sleep

Fearless warrior amidst an invisible reflection -
hidden behind the dark shadows that swiftly move across my path

Beneath the solid exterior, weakened mind chasing down vivid dreams; portraying entities not of sound and mind

Oblivious to the surroundings of the sheltering prospects -
tic toc

Delays returning to sunshine

~ Liz ~

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  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Excellent poem of depression, or life's landmines. Well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Great job expressing the confusion and despair that most will face at some point in there life!! Keep up the good work, and be stron!! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem had an edge to it and I can see why you put it in the dark section. This poem calls out to the reader and lets them explore the poem on a much deeper level

    5/5

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