Comments : Tic Toc

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem had an edge to it and I can see why you put it in the dark section. This poem calls out to the reader and lets them explore the poem on a much deeper level

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Great job expressing the confusion and despair that most will face at some point in there life!! Keep up the good work, and be stron!! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Excellent poem of depression, or life's landmines. Well done