by Something Diabolical Oct 24, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Robots are built and found everywhere |
This is good I enjoyed reading it but you might want to double check for spelling errors an such,,,you might have some but idk,,,a good poem,,keep up the good work :) |
by Amreen
Nice poem....something different from the ones we usually see on this site....are you en engineering student or something....?? |
Excellent work! Great take on our modern society. Really makes you think. Could be longer. I would suggest taking a second wack at it. I'm sure theres more to write down. |
Excellent work! Great take on our modern society. Really makes you think. Could be longer. I would suggest taking a second wack at it. I'm sure theres more to write down. |