Wow this is powerfull, the way you speak about death is very sad yet creative, I like how you say you don't have time to place death in your calendar and overall I think you penned a great piece so 5/5

Oh and nominated :)

Yes, this is very poweful indeed, sad and creative,
Jenni, everytime I read something of yours, I feel myself entering a new world, your words are vivid with imagery and the flow is flawless,
What a sad piece,
that ending was magnificent.

kisses, hugs
Love
Tara
xxx

AMAZING the poem is touching and lovely:) freat work a 5/5

Damn, very powerful and vivid. I am speechless. Its hypnotizing, once you start to read it is impossible to stop for one does not want to break free from this point of losing control.

Have to say, a poet must start with the first line and keep alluring the readers until are they tangled within the poem and leave pondering and reflecting. And you have accomplished the task. It was a delight reading this piece. Flawless is the word.

"My cold leather couch
placed in the middle of this
colorless room.
Unseeing eyes focus
on that nonexistent point.

The air is dank from tears
I wanted to cry and galling
because of my hollow self.
Why do these minutes last
several hours?"

^ I loved how you set the scene out for the reader. This opening really invites the reader in and draws there focus to the rest of the poem.

5/5

This is such a beautiful poem, i love how vivid it is and how you make the reader feel the emotion and vision the scene. well done 5/5 ^.^

A wonderful wonderful poem I must say...
beautifully penned the emotions of death...:))

This poem has strength and intensity. Awesome wording, great flow and excellent clarity. Good job girl

The title draws me straight in ive been adoring your poetry the last 5 to 8 poems have been flawless you are becoming a serious lil poetess. .. This poem as amazing the wording and flow were perfect. ... One of the best on this site in my eyes wonderful x

The title draws me straight in ive been adoring your poetry the last 5 to 8 poems have been flawless you are becoming a serious lil poetess. .. This poem as amazing the wording and flow were perfect. ... One of the best on this site in my eyes wonderful x

Wow... the power of the written word has just been outdone by...JENNI. :D Haha. Anyway, that was beyond touching and you gave me a different outlook on how death can feel. The intensity and raw feelings, of which you have penned were so...brilliant..

5/5

-Heather