Dream Man [pt 1]

by Lofallenve   Oct 24, 2011


There is a man who stands
shrouded in the cloudy
landscape of the imagination.
His features are lost
to the human eye,
but he remains ever
so perceptible to the rest
of the human senses.
A name does not attach
itself to this man,
for it cannot,
because this man does not exist.
For this man to be alive,
in this very existence,
would indeed be one
of the greatest disappointments.

[Because of how long this poem is, I broke it up into multiple ones]

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    I my self don't recommend breaking a poem up into parts, it just makes the flow of the whole thing dissipate as the reader has to wait to get to the next part. I have a lot of really long poems, one of my poems called "ONE in the SAME" is almost 10 pages long. Its a very deep poem about existence itself. Most people get lost in it's depth but one gentleman actually read it over and over again tell he finally got it, we discuss it a lot in our comments on the poem.
    Anyway enough about my long poem. On to the next part of this.

    by the way so far I really like it... its very interesting.

More Poems By Lofallenve