by Lofallenve Oct 24, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Every night it is the same; |
by L
My bad , I know this poem is sad because she feels alone but i couldn't help to laugh because of your last sentence,... about who's view it is. |
by L
It kept me entertain... Haha and I am go with a Teddy bear. Pretty cool. |
by BlueJay
This is amazing. You have done an excellent job. I think that the story is fantastic. Your use of emotion is marvelous. This is a 5/5 from me |
by BlueJay
This is amazing. You have done an excellent job. I think that the story id |
by Jenni
The title is really eye-catching and your words pulled me in even more. You might think about putting your note to the end up this poem and making the reader guess out of what point of view this is written. That might keep the tension up and the "surprise" might even make this poem more memorable. |