First off I think this poem would look better if you put a few gaps in but at the end of the day thats your choice. That said I loved the poem and what you were saying. This poem had attitude! so few of decide to stand up and say something fair and honest but you just did that with this poem

5/5

Hey Jenna,

Thanks for your comments and vote!

Always appreciated x

I never thought about spaces but I will see how it looks with them.

It's great because sometimes you can't see what others can

Thanks heaps

Liz

I LOVED this! Something that is much more common then most people realize. And I'm so sad that I myself see a lot of it. Many people will say they don't care but in some small way they do, so this prayer really hit home for me. This isn't something to many people will write about so I'm really glad you did. I just wish more people had that attitude. Another great piece. 5/5

I loved that because it showed an important part of you, I haven't talked to you, as yet, still I feel you are a kind person, because of this piece, you care about lives taken with force and about animals, as I read on your profile, that's something I rarely find in people. I admire it, however.
You kept your language simple throughout the poem, liked the style and the 'fair' tone you were talking with.

Just a minor thing, dear Lioness. The title didn't stand out to me, I mean, it is relevant, and it has no grammatical error or anything, it's just...it wasn't that eye-catchy, and if this poem wasn't you recent one I wouldn't really be that interested to read it. I don't want to sound rude, I want to be honest, so that you can know what your work really means to the reader. :)

Nevertheless, the poem was really meaningful, I liked almost everything, good poetry.

Very beautiful thoughts, a prayer for the neglected, downtrodden, deprived, racially discriminated, the social outcasts, casualties of war, our animal friends, and more...

The compassion expressed here is certainly from the mirror of a noble soul.

Indeed, amazing thoughts. They speak on behalf of almost every person.. the message was delivered, awesomely.

GREAT