Now, you're gone

by Meme   Oct 25, 2011


Here I am standing,
expecting you to notice
Oh, how clumsy I must
think.

I even put on the
bracelet you once
gave me. You said
it will always bring
me luck, well thats
all I need now.

You promised me
one last dance,
one last time for
me to lose myself
in your arms.

But it seems that
you've lost yourself
in the crowd, just
before I got the
chance to say
-Goodbye.

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 13 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    U always make me smile :) good job

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is a good simple poem I loved it 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Oh my gosh this poem is so freaking amazing!!! The emotion is present and empowering. I absolutely love love love this piece. You have done an excellent job. The beginning is terrific and the end is perfect.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This was so sad! :( but it was also very powerful and beautiful in its own way.

    "But it seems that
    you've lost yourself
    in the crowd, just
    before I got the
    chance to say
    -Goodbye."

    ^
    For me the above was the best part of the poem

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by cory

    Powerfully worded i could really relate to this. good job

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