Comments : Frozen

  • 13 years ago

    by Jeremy S Farley

    Good imagery but too short to tell the story clearly.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    ^I disagree.

    The imagery was serenely penned, and I thought the length was just right.
    It ended well with questions lingering, and gave me something to think about.

    I enjoyed this very much

    love,
    Tara
    xxxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    An interesting right, I liked the ending. Loneliness can be extremely difficult for almost everyone. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 12 years ago

    by sniper

    This poem is great.. i can feel each word. :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Loneliness is a nightly visitor
    He hungers for a companion
    or for the end to come."
    ^
    This is simple yet lovely..

    The length is fine with me. It is a dark poem. They're usually meant to be obscure and mysterious, and this is just it. The ending is quite happy and I love that about this piece. Dark poetry most of the time, end sadly or tragically, but this showed how their loneliness ceased - by finding each other.

    Truly enjoyed this piece. Keep writing,