The palm of his hand

by Chelsey   Oct 25, 2011


On it lies the breath of my being,
from kissing your fingers
around every knuckle and vein.
My lips slumber between the spaces,
like a slave to its masters hands

Carried by it is the weight of my cheek
when its caressed in such adoration
that not even the slightest touch,
could express the amount of passion
that we bestow in our hearts.

In it is my hand,
laced together like a rope
portraying I am yours.
Not even the strongest power
could separate the two.

Held by it is my future,
that I so trustingly give to you.
Leaving every wise decision,
in the palm of your hands.

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  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Held by it is my future,
    that I so trustingly give to you.
    Leaving every wise decision,
    in the palm of your hands..

    Wow..beautiful lines..can turn anyone decision..

    Fp

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This a well put together love poem. I cannot find anything wrong with it. I liked how you gave the poem depth without overloading the reader with too much detail. It's like you had the perfect place for everything.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Whatever works

    That was such a heartwarming poem
    like someone said makes someone want to fall in love
    its such a beautifull way to write about this
    its a very touching poem of love and I hope its true cause these words deserve to be <3 hehe

    lovely writing

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    This poem is filled with how much love you feel for him. Saying nothing can separate the two of you. How in the end it all comes down to him with the decision.

    Great Job :)
    It flowed perfectly.
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was so sweet! Makes someone want to fall in love. :) I don't have any critiques because Britt and Mel covered it all. What I will say, thought, is how this had me smiling and feeling happy for the person and that they have found their significant other.

    Very cute love poem!

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