Comments : Our Story

  • 13 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    Very nice poem. Thought it was great. Loved the part: The sound of your voice writes a melody on my heart
    Written in permanent ink to never be torn apart
    Well done sweetheart. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awwwww... this is such a sweet, cute love poem! I really enjoyed it - it just gave me a nice, happy feeling! I think the final stanza was a perfect ending, I loved these lines:

    "Forever is what our future holds
    With each day that passes our story unfolds. "

    Beautiful!