"Let's start with the pinks, as gentle as you," -- I really loved this line. The colour pink in general has a soft, baby theme to it; it's girly, pretty and innocent, which appear to all be descriptions of the person being described.
"they cry upon my soul that I apologies." -- This is a lovely description; there's something so strong about the wording of "cry upon my soul". However, I think it should be "apologise" instead of "apologies", as the latter means more than one apology, as in: "..he offered up his apologies."
"Please accept my apology." was all he said -- here it should also be a comma after 'apology' not a full stop.