This was a very strong piece. It held my attention and refused to let go. Beautifully written poem :) Bravo!

I agree its a beautifuly written poam, I love it:) a 5 from me:)

I agree its a beautifuly written poam, I love it:) a 5 from me:)

This is a wonderful poem that brings strength to the reader 5/5

It's quite mesmerizing, this poem.
What I like the most is the usage of the questions.

I think they gave rise to another questions.. doubts.. amazing images full of question marks, alongside depth and flow.

Great one.

5/5
This really got to me cause i tend to be a person who takes the easy road because every time i took the hard path i would find myself struggling with no support to help me when i fell. This has made me want to keep trying though thank you for sharing this work :]

I agree with everyone ..
5/5

I like the sense of place, So descriptive, you can feel how cold the snow is, or how sharp the rocks are...

Also the word "daunting"... you could have used any word.... like 'scary' or 'frightening' but daunting describes it soo much better than anything i can think of...

the Underlying theme that "the difficult things are difficult for a reason" is very compelling to me
so many people take the easy road in life. You only get out what you put in. And you put your heart into this poem
I can not iterate enough... this really is an amazing poem

Personally, i felt like it was message sent by God fpr his children if u read every single detail in it again from my point of view youll understand. Im not saying that thats the writers intention, but Personally i read it and understood it like that.
It was very beautiful inspirational amazing and so far my favorite poem, it seems to me it has such more greater hidden meaning in my opinion :)