I saw Sadness appeased through this ink.. But, Smile is message of assurance.. Cheer Up, poet!!! Good one!

This poem really conveys strong feelings!

Strong emotional words, penned in pain.

It's raw in truth but it needs a lil more emotion and direction don't worry u can make it i know you can everyone can!

Let t evaporate....show the t to all.gud one..PLEASE DON'T GO..

When they leave you, it's a nightmare that no one can help you walk up from, it's a walking pit of shameful regrets and disappointments and things you miss more then you have started to imagine. A slash through your body that sometimes bleeds hard, and sometimes bleeds extremely hard, losing the one you love knocks you down a thousands flights of stairs. You try but you can't move anywhere, you want to rewind and be with him, change what you think made it go wrong and you shot anger at yourself and haterd towards the one who is killing you. You wish for anything that will bring him back, it jst doesn't seem fair, why you can love someone like that, and it crush, your hopes and dreams with him are all busted. You've lost the light in your because something happened and you two are through, so the brightness of each day has gone missing. Bring him back, you pray, you might get to point somedays you wish you could write him a goodbye night and then say goodbye to life. forever falling apart, that's how you feel, a treasure and an unbelievable gift is lost and nothing but the worst ache you've ever engulfed has been gained. It's so hard to stand/stay strong, when the one you love, un-I Love you's you!