This feels so dark and spooky to me Sylvia Just in time for halloween! it is definitly spewing with darkness, I'd probably have put it in the dark section. Nice write lady!

Each word of this was so well put together. The flow was stellar, and the wording gave me a chill and yet so much more then just a little dark

I really like the wording and imagery alot. Very well put together but I'm unsure of what its about.

I really like the wording and imagery alot. Very well put together but I'm unsure of what its about.

A very very good write, it fits the song so well, with a variation on the wording. I see you have a d/v aren't' they just lovely ppl
Excellent job , you need to write more so we can enjoy more of your work

I love how everyone reads different things in songs and poetry alike.
You really knocked this out of the park and have inspired me to attempt this type of lyric infused poetry.
Impeccable flow and glorious imagery. Well done!

I love this song and I think your poem does it justice. -Nik

Reading this brought such vivid images to my
mind..it like seeing a wounded soul taking
her revenge only thing with great power. Very well written..take care.

Water added for scrying, divining the future,
ingredients for a spell, symbol of rebirth.
Warring armies bringing dead warriors,
add a dash of nice, a pinch of empathy.

I find this stanza to be the most intriguing. Portrays the obvious, that is creativity. The flow is pretty fluid and the composition as a whole is quite alluring. Splendid job.

I really enjoyed this, it was a fun write.

"Witches cooking up their potions,
no leprechauns hiding their treasure there."

I liked the dark humor. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for but it was good none the less! 5/5

mandy :)

A very intriguing piece.I really enjoyed your flowing.Bravo.5/5