Wow wow wow AMAZING I loved it very wonderfully done excellent, splendid,fantastic, terrific, outstanding job and poem,,,you are a great poet and I'm delighted to read ur wonderful work :) 5/5

You penned a perfect rhyme , with an excellent flow. It was smooth reading, with great wording.
Nothing to suggest you got it going on. Great write

I have to agree with the two previous comments. Lee you are amazing. :)
5/5

Thiks is perfectly written for my taste, and I would not change a thing

I agree with others and nothing to critique about...!5/5

I'm somewhat a 'little' older than you Lee but you have struck such a vein of truth which, I have tried to conceal for years. I threw away many 'loves' because I only thought of 'me'..........You have an 'old' head on your young shoulders my friend and I am impressed.
Peter.

This is really good, even though its from a guys view it has alot of meaning and it reminds me of an ex