This was really good, very clear emotions. i like these lines: "you stabbed me in the back / and left me for dead" and "You finally killed me" |
Wow a strong deep poem,,,u can feel sadness anger hurt just coursing through each word and it ends strong kinda like bein shoot in the heart,,,a great poem,,I loved it 5/5 |
by Burning Angel
Wow, this is so good, I really liked it :D i give it 5/5 |