Comments : Drifted apart, faded away...

  • 13 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    A very sad poem, very heartfelt!
    though the twist at the end saying your over her was good
    too me the rhyming seemed quite forced, which made it not flow so well.
    Keep at it!

    "Love was just not meant for you and I,
    I spent too many nights questioning your heart,
    Wondering if you felt the same way,
    Thinking that we should be apart."

    was my fav part
    i can definatly relate

    all in all a very good piece just keep working on those rhymes

    4/5 from me =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow deep wonderful amazing I loved it though a lil sad but that helps the poem good too,,,you can imagine this and just feel the emotions as ur own,,,a really great written poem :) amazing like always :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Ohhh

    I loved it made me cry a little

    Well done 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Ohhh

    I loved it made me cry a little

    Well done 5/5