Comments : Overdose Of Calories (Bulimia)

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You outdid yourself here,
    You really created a masterpiece here, seriously,
    you penned the pain of bullimia perfectly, the feelings and emotions were breathtaking, the words were simple yet effective

    I could really picture this young woman retching and vomiting in the toilet, scared, alone and lost.

    I hope that this was purely fiction, and if you ever need to talk, I am here as are we all.

    Love,
    always
    Tara
    xxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    You described this really well, I know how it is, I was slightly bulimic in the past and I can say this how it's like. Great Job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow!! That was painful, sad, and just I dont know @_@
    Last verse just show the desperation and depression.

    Great job.

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Jenna! I could relate to thisssss. So depressive and so true, simple, effective! loved this write, just onething:

    I BEG YOU TO NOT CAPITALIZE THE FIRST LETTERS! ;P

    Love you, good poetry.