Then you whisper in my |
by Boy
This poem has a very good flow of words. and easy to understand.. and an example of cute love. great work. |
by Decayed
And indeed, you left me breathless Meme. |
Funny how each poem has a different way of describing love. I think this was one of realism, it does leave you gasping for air, the last emotional breath. Great flow, read easy, smoothly..Excellent |
by nouriguess
Yes, sooo true, it leaves you breathless. :) |
WOW!!! I loved this poem so much!!!! Good work!!! :) This brought tears to my heart from how sweet it was!!! :) I'm still smiling!!! :) |
by Ole Carsten
Wauh thats good |