Oh my, I know exactly where this comes from,
I see the anger, sadness and despair in each lines and it's so simple how you use the words, I can relate.

The flow is good and the rhymes are good too.

I just feel a deep sadness, but I am sure your Mom would miss you, be strong, girl

Love,
Tara
xxx

Sad and heart breaking, I love the way you expresses this girls pain. I death seems to be the easy way out but really it's not.

Aw :(