Nice job with the form. You captured the emotion and thoughts of someone letting go of pain from a bad love affair good job.

Meena you penned perfection again ;-)

That can't be a easy write and able to make it sound understandable. Well done, take care and hope your son is better
Hugs

Being restricted to structure, yet venting emotions in such a fantabulous manner is not the virtue of every poet. Letting go, is difficult. The heart wants, what it wants. Marvelous job. It is so hard to pick a favorite stanza. This was short and heavy.

I always enjoy your poems. this one is very nice. I enjoy the structured formats, I found them a real challenge and a good learning tool.
Very nice Meena

Pain and perfection penned in only a dozen lines of packed syllables.

What to say, here... You are the queen of formed poetry, I never read a formed poem by you and thought it was not well-written, they all express true feelings and simple thoughts, yet the form you used is complicated and so difficult, you again did a great job, here, Meena, I'm so glad you posted a new poem, keep writing.

You know,

As for me, whenever I try to follow a pattern or rather a type of structure, I tend to lose the point or meaning that i want to give to my poem.

But in here, you did a really good job.

You portrayed some one who finally was able to let go for he/she realize that everything was just a lied and not a reality.

Sad but its better to know the truth than to keep blinding our self and see only what we want.

Amen, pain has to be let go...