Comments : Bite Your Lip

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    You poem always have attitude and power I loved this poem so much! you kick arse! :)

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    Awesome. I see hope!!

    "My favorite lines"
    Happiness is truth,
    fake smiles are for the insecure.

    Well written poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Very inspiring actually. =) Remain strong!
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    This poem definitely belongs in this life/inspirational category, this was great!

    "Happiness is truth,
    fake smiles are for the insecure. "

    This piece spoke to me, it is just beyond truthful. I love the strength in your poem, I felt the emotion here was very powerful.

    "I grew up brave,
    I always had something to say."

    This piece made me feel incredibly connected to the poem - this is me to a "T".. well it still is, I'm a little too opinionated, haha! This was a great write!

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    This poem definitely belongs in this life/inspirational category, this was great!

    "Happiness is truth,
    fake smiles are for the insecure. "

    This piece spoke to me, it is just beyond truthful. I love the strength in your poem, I felt the emotion here was very powerful.

    "I grew up brave,
    I always had something to say."

    This piece made me feel incredibly connected to the poem - this is me to a "T".. well it still is, I'm a little too opinionated, haha! This was a great write!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    I didn't really expect this, but I am quite glad that I came across this poem because it's definately encouraging and relateable. I love the strenght of your words and the spirit in this poem. I don't only like the message you convey, but also the flow of this poem. Well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This well written poem is original and matches your profile to a T. I enjoyed pondering the deep meaning and loved the style

  • 13 years ago

    by Amreen

    Oh wonderful...!
    I must say this poem possess inspiration and you really have the power to influence in the right way through your poem,I felt it...keep it up..!

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Bravo! girl. I am amazed each time when I see someone so young with the bravado of the fearless Joan of Arc. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is soo good!!! i really liiked it. it had alot of inspiration in it. and it is just amazing to be able to read it!!!