Wow this is really amazing even thought heart-breaking, the amont of emotions and imagery is really good

I'd recommend you to add some punctuation, but now to the more important part of this poem. I absolutely enjoyed this read. I've never been in that situation neither do I know what it feels like to be treated liek that by your family, since my family is simply great, but your words they were so real and pure, capitvating and absolutely touching. I rarely felt this sad after reading a poem, but you managed it once more. The ending was really heartbreaking and you penned an amazing poem!

Indeed.... the best solution of the worst is to go and never come back... run away...

I know it's hard to satisfy parents.. capture their attention.. make them love us, unconditionally.. I know that. I know it!

And it's so hard to deal with that... -- YOU JUST amazingly portrayed that in your poem.

Maybe the rhymes touched me.. or maybe that I can relate to this piece.. with all my 7 senses.

Amazing job.
High Five.

This made me sad :(

The pain the boy feels when family is supposed to be about love. Finally meeting someone whom he gets along with & in the end he leaves too. Getting the courage to leave & never return.

Love this. Penned perfectly with such pain & sorrow.<3
5/5

I felt a sharp pain reading this one that pierced the heart. t
To think so many live this piece you penned with not only bruises but shame of thinking they caused it.
Very good right You're a true Poet my friend

xx Connie

Wow, penned beautifully my friend! The poem showed so much power and emotion! Good work!

Beautifulllll(: 5/5