Comments : One vs. Two

  • 13 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Enough said!! Great piece, you have warned those who need warning, and take no responsibility in the outcome of their decision!!!!!!!!!!! Great atempt in making oyhers lives better!!!!! :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    A good poem with
    great point.
    Warning given,
    heeded or not,
    there will be an outcome.

    Keep on writing Mag!

  • 13 years ago

    by Mag

    Ty ^.^

  • 12 years ago

    by retha

    I like your rithm , I like your style , I think I will stay here for a little while.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Nice write I loved and enjoyed reading it and I agree with the first comment from captain lonesome :) great write and keep up the good work :)