Broken

by Dezi   Oct 29, 2011


Busted heart,
busted mind,
lately i feel this all the time,
don't approve, don't agree,
haven't for centuries,
cold as ice, hot as fire,
words that meet my desire,
melted heart,
busted soul,
this life has taken it's tole,
my chest aching,
heart is breaking,
you think it's nonsense,
i might just use some offense,
running to stay still,
words that could kill,
It just makes me ill.

this is my very first song, i think my songs are better than my poems (:

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jeremy S Farley

    I agree with Dakota. This is pretty good but it seems like you didnt put much time or thought into it. I would suggest going through it again sometime and see if you can add to it or change it. Above all keep working. You have alot of potential.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kota the Unheard

    You need to put mor efert in it if you dont it sometimes makes no sence this one is good