by Dezi Oct 29, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Busted heart, |
I agree with Dakota. This is pretty good but it seems like you didnt put much time or thought into it. I would suggest going through it again sometime and see if you can add to it or change it. Above all keep working. You have alot of potential. |
You need to put mor efert in it if you dont it sometimes makes no sence this one is good |