by tolu Oct 29, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
This morning. i rose from my bed and the first thing i heard was her call. i thought she wanted to say good morning, no, she told me i won't see her again, she said she had tried to love me, to look beyond my mistakes, to see whether i'd mend my ways but i couldn't do any of this. yes, i know it's my fault but you should just have given me one more chance to do all i was supposed to do, to say what i'd wanted to say, to let you know that i love you. to give you just a kiss that i'd remember for the rest of my life. a second to say i'm sorry. |
by tolu
Thanx guys 4 ur comments. i rili apriciate it. lolz. |
by Marvellous
..But, what if she wouldn't.., then, learn, What repels is not meant to Be! Good job bro! Thanks 4 informing us. 5v! |
by Burning Angel
This is really good, i liked the way it was, and it was very easy to read |
by Dezi
A very good worded poem. It's a very good way to state the situation, but remember chances are things you need to cherish most and the things that run out very quickly. |