Comments : Loves question

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wow,mermaid..now evry othr poem of u is like a masterpiece..

    I have js 5 to gv..

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Love,
    it is a need,
    a want
    and one day
    I'll be complete
    when destiny meets fate.

    one of my fav lines.. a cute example of innocent love. i love the idea... its good poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    "Facts, truths, myths,
    legends, stories, movies
    and fairy tales.
    They have to get it from somewhere
    or was it their dreams"

    ^ loved this part of that stanza

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Bobby

    My favorite line

    I am a girl with dreams
    and I have to believe

    As read and reread the poem that stood out to me as I am the only one really that can make my dreams come true and if I dont believe in them why should anyone else.

    I truly love your writings and your heart you place into words :0)