Amazing Amazing Amazing rhythm between 'should' - 'misunderstood' - 'could' - 'hood' ..

For a moment, I felt I was reading 'F**n Perfect' by P!nk.

I was so captured, especially by the opening stanza.

Great job Meme.

HIGH FIVE

Love this :)

A day came when they all
understood, I no longer wear
that hood. And learned that
if you ever could, then you
always should.
-I can relate to this. Taking off the hood coming out of your shell :)

Amazing poem, knowing that if u can do something then you will :)

5/5

A day came when they all
understood, I no longer wear
that hood. And learned that
if you ever could, then you
always should.

Hmmm, rhyming in rhyme then rhyming again. interesting to read i will definitely try it :) a good idea.

And poem is good short to the point and easy to understand for reader. good work

Nice , Nice I read it once I read it twice.
I realy have to say it was delectably nice.

Haha
I like this kind of your poetry Meme, Its where you truly really excel,
this was a very smooth flowing poem, and the message behind it was very clear, loud and defiant, I appreciate it very much
strong woman my friend

I was just looking through and came across this little gem, i have always loved your rhyming missy :-). In my brain i call this one the 'oods' for obvious reasons lol but i do love the way that it flows, i think this will probably only make sense to me but its kinds a broken flow(but in a good way) the way you wrote it makes the reader pause after each line and i love it when a poem takes control of the reader, like it says "if your gonna read me, then your gonna read me my way'

Love it :-)