I like how your wrote, this question your proposed at the end is very thought provoking. :)
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I think that you portray a vivid image with your words, becaused the detailed discriptions gave me the possibility to paint a picture in my head while reading this poem. I have to agree with the comment above that the questions is really thought provoking.

Its supposed to establish a new form of looking at people and yourself, its basically just recreating the idea of individualism to a degree no one can measure.