by Innocent Fairy Oct 30, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Draw me in with your crazy eyes |
Amazing, your imagery is amazing. 5/5 GREAT WRITE. Please keep up your wonderful work. |
Amazing, your imagery is amazing. 5/5 GREAT WRITE. Please keep up your wonderful work. |
I quite enjoyed reading this :) Made such vivid images form in my mind, very wonderfully done. I always love when I can be transported to the word of the poem :) *but then who wouldn't want to be transformed to a vampires world?* |
Another nice work. I really enjoy reading your stuff. You consistantly put out good poetry. The vampire romance is bit overdone but you had a nice take on it. |
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Imagery is really in-depth and amazingly descriptive. The words evolving into metaphors and very strong flowing sentence are the key to this piece. Enjoyed the read, it was different and unique. 5/5 |