by Something Diabolical Oct 30, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Once again its that time of year |
by L
I truly enjoy the read of this piece, you were on control of the rhymes and of the story. I really liked it. The monsters in one's heads, in Halloween. Lol It's a nightmare. |
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Imagery is really in-depth and amazingly descriptive. The words evolving into metaphors and very strong flowing sentence are the key to this piece. Enjoyed the read very much so. 5/5 |
Great job. Good flow and use of words. Nice origanal story. This is one of my favorite peices Ive read on this site. Keep up the awesome work! |
Love this :) |
by yogi73
This is kick ass! great rhyming and great control with the story telling. This is a keeper! well done! |