This is kick ass! great rhyming and great control with the story telling. This is a keeper! well done!

Love this :)

i can see it all playing out. truly what halloween is all about

5/5

Great job. Good flow and use of words. Nice origanal story. This is one of my favorite peices Ive read on this site. Keep up the awesome work!

Imagery is really in-depth and amazingly descriptive. The words evolving into metaphors and very strong flowing sentence are the key to this piece. Enjoyed the read very much so. 5/5

I truly enjoy the read of this piece, you were on control of the rhymes and of the story. I really liked it. The monsters in one's heads, in Halloween. Lol It's a nightmare.
The rhymes made me smile. Keep up the great work.