Never trust someone until they "act" not just "say"
I understood exactly what you meant with this poem, you start questioning everything he ever said. Was it true? Or were they just a bunch of lies?

Good job :)

HOLLY!

what?

this is amazing.. like a song or something, it sounds.

You Said this & that.. shows so many contradictory emotions portrayed by the opposite terms...

I say, this is amazing!

The ending had me captured a lot, like magnet.

And the rhythm between 'Say and disarray' reflects the sadness.

Great job, Holy.