Wow I loved it amazingly done and worded greatly,,,very good fantastic job :) 5/5

This is awesome. These are the types of poems I love to read. Ill be folowing this story closely.

I like the time and effort you put into this, I like epic poetry because it has a story woven in with imagery in few words, so each word has to hold more weight then a normal long drawn out story. Keep it up!