hiya |
that is a really good poem. the words you chose were perfect and they flowed beautifully. I wish the best for your sister. Everything you said is true, there are so many people with two identities, so many people think that only good looks make you happy. keep it up |
by Angela
I know how she feels, it kills you slowly, but she can overcome it. |
by yup
Wow what a powerful poem. It shows a strong message, about this issue. My aunt had anorexia so I know what it is like to have it in the family. I hope your sister is doing ok and that she can overcome this. |
by stephyG
hey your poem really touched me coz i know how dat gurl feelZ... and i hope ur sister is well also. keep up writting and i hope to read more!! |
by Marta
Your poem was very beautiful. I'm also anorexic and am getting help. Your poem has been an inspiration to me, and I wanted to thank you for writing it. It was moving and sends a very meaningful message out there to young girls like me. There is help, I know now. Once again, thank you very much for writing such a beautiful piece of poetry! I'll hang it up somewhere in my room for comfort and to know there's a way out from such a horrible disease. Keep it up, :). |
This was a wonderful poem. The end comment that you made meant a lot, and it's oh so true. Stay strong girl, try and help your sister through it. |
this is a great poem! i really liked it. keep writing! lonelyANDunloved |
by lonelynow
I just wanna thank you for writing this. it meant alot to me. thankyou. |