This poem brought tears from my eyes. this poem refresh my all old pains once again.. you words have the power. and your words attracted me and brought me in past. i have forgotten my old memories but by this poem they all refresh once again. such a sad piece. you are such a great writer. because if u write this poem then definitely your others pom would be good too.

i love your poem

High Five Yaki.

Your poems are remarkable because they have details... some things that appear very normal and cliche in real life, but the way you put them into words is flawless..

I found something
that felt like
hitting my little
toe on the end of a table..

^ I love this part.